Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Three kids in a closed school

" There are three kids and they are all best friends there names are Ana, Dulce ,and Chris." Dulce and Ana were on there way to school when they meet Chris replied,"Where are you too going to be after school.''




Ana answered,"We are going to be at Dulce house."





He cried,"because I want you and Dulce to help me with my science project."





Dulce replied,"Just tell my mom that you need to see Dulce because if you don't say that my mom will want to know what we where talking about OK."




Chris answered,"OK then."




Then they got to school and saw that every one was inside the school and then Ana went to go see what was going on and they were late for school because they went earlier then the other times so they went inside and saw that all the hallways were empty then Chris was scared because he was going to get in trouble his mom.





Ana yelled,"Chris why are you scared."








Chris replied,"I'm not scared I'm just wandering were the kids are at."





Dulce screamed,"you two better stop fighting or else someone is going to know we are in the hallway and we are going to get in trouble by the teathers and they are going to call are parents that we came late to school.





Chris yelled,"OK then I'll stop but if he starts to say that I'm scared I'm going to tell her thinks to."





Ana replied,"OK I'll stop and wont say anything no more about Chris being scared."



After a while they started to hear a lot of notice coming from the other hallway so they went to go hide and then the notice went away and they went out and saw that the lights were off and Chris.

Ana yelled,"What is going on?"

Chris repiled,"Come over here the school is very dark."

Dulce anwsered,"Don't go he is just trying to play a trick on you."

Chris yelled,"I'm not playing a trick on you OK."






















Tuesday, June 16, 2009

Something Girl

Something Girl By Beth Goobie






My book Something Girl is Realistic fiction because it could happen like in my book it say that Jujube dad hit her a lot and someone dad could hit them to so that is why it is realistic fiction.The summary of Something Girl is about a girl name Jujube and Froggy Jujube dad is the one who hit her a lot he hits her because she say something she is not aloud to say because if she does her dad will be embarrassed with all his neighbors so if she does she will get hit but even wrost then what she gets hit.Froggy is one of Jujube best friend and Froggy always worries about her like when her dad hit her and she had a lot of bruises Froggy cried "What happened to you?" Jujube replied "nothing I just fell of my bike and I got my bruise and my bumb on my head.Froggy replied,"When did did you get your bumps and your brusie?"Froggy said,"I got it when I left from your house when you told your mom that my dad hits me alot that was when I feel of my bike." Jujube,"Ok then I will leave you alone now and won't tell you anymore about your hits."Froggy replied,"OK bye." Jujube said," bye."